Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Topic Sentence - Blood Wedding

In Blood Wedding, the Neighbor enjoys taking part in rumors and gossip, and this aspect shows how the Neighbor is subtly manipulative, specifically in terms of the Mother.
Posted by Harrison Le at 10:23 PM

3 comments:

  1. MichelleMay 10, 2012 at 3:31 PM

    Insight:6
    Accuracy:5
    Clarity:5

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  2. Tristy R.May 10, 2012 at 5:26 PM

    6
    6
    4- a little wordy, clean it up.

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  3. Matt FranzMay 10, 2012 at 6:57 PM

    Accuracy- 5
    Insight- 6
    Clarity- 4. Ending needs to be fixed. what about the mother is she manipulating?

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